2011年11月2日 星期三

Revised annotation1-2 Do human really have right to decide the life and death of stray dogs? Is euthanasia really painless?

 Source: Youtube( The truth of the euthanasia in Taiwan)
  Revision: I try to write my point in more rational way, throwing out the problems for reader to think. The paragraphs also are divided in more specific way, not so emotional, and try to be more subject
  All over the world, the problem of stray dogs has been a debating for a long time. Although many people have thought up many ways to try to resolve or ease the problem, there are still many dogs wondering on the road. This difficult problem needs resolving, and the one who is the most straightly powerful is our government.  When we focus on the policies which deal with the problem of stray dogs in Taiwan, we will find out that the main idea of these policies is similar: using killing to control the amount of stray dogs. Many people agree with it because they think it is a painless way for dogs to die and this may be a simpler and quicker solution. However, it is not actually a painless and reasonable way after we saw this film clip.
  Life is individual and must be treated in respect, no matter it is alive or dead. Stray dogs do cause problems, and some people agree with euthanasia to solve this problem because they think it is painless. Nevertheless, euthanasia is cruel and pitiless. If these dogs can not be treated with dignity and respect when they are put to death, no one will focus on the right of living. Furthermore, no one will want to think deeper about do they really need to be put to death, but if we see the cruel truth presented in the film, we can try to force some people to pay attention to this way of dealing with their problem. The main problem which causes this kind of problem is because we do not regard them equally. We think we are superior to them, so we use our improvement to control and change the condition to what we want. Therefore, we can try to explain why euthanasia is painful. We just focus on the results that they are dead in the end, but we do not pay attention to the process. We just simply think that the medicine which put into their bodies must worked, but we do not care about the pain they endured will be severer.
  Why do they endure such pain? We think we have right to decide their lives and death, so we use our thoughts to put them to death. Euthanasia seems a kind way for them to die in painless way. However, when we decide to put them to death, the owners of breeding grounds keep making puppies to sell. Although we use euthanasia to make them dead to decrease their amount, on the other hand, we use breeding to fulfill customers’ need. How does euthanasia work in this occasion? What is the meaning for us to decide their lives and death in this occasion?

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